Not all that breaks can be fixed
Cookies, crayons and that rare crystal vase
Not all that breaks needs to be fixed
silence, rhythm and trains of thought
Some things that break can offer lessons
a broken trust, a broken heart
Some things that break are better when broken
a break in the clouds, a break in a fever
spring breaks, and coffee breaks and
breaking out in wild free laughter
Photo by Mrugesh Shah courtesy of Unsplash.
The Day Twenty-four prompt is to write a poem that begins with a line from another poem (not necessarily the first one), but then goes elsewhere with it.
I chose the poem I Will Keep Broken Things by Alice Walker. I used a repeating line as my title and another line (both in italics) in the last line of this poem.
oh my! i am going to keep this broken thing – this poem about broken things, i mean – in my mind for sure
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Thank you for your kind words. I’m glad you stopped by.
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🙏💓🙏
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It reminds me of Kintsugi, the Japanese practice/art of fixing broken pottery visibly, where the breakage lines are highlighted in gold or other precious metal. Sometimes we need to celebrate what’s broken? 🙂
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I like that comparison, EW. I am a great fan of Kintsugi and wabi sabi. Thanks for stopping by.
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Lovely!!! 😊
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Thank you.
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Writing “I Will Keep Broken Things” must be the poet’s equivalent of the Kintsugi artist repairing a broken bowl, with a Zen break for free laughter. 🙂
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Maybe the Zen laughter is the gold of the Kintsugi artist. 🙂 I always so enjoy your comments CES. Thanks for dropping by and gracing us with your unique perspective.
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Perhaps it is the gold bespoke for poetry of broken urns of odic aura. 🙂
Always inspired by your enlightened poetry, LuAnne, always enjoy companionable silence between the lines, grateful to you and yours for the gracious hospitality. 🙂
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A lovely reminder 🥰
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Thank you, Val.
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This is so beautiful and meaningful. Love it, LuAnne. Congratulations on being featured. Well deserved.
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Thank you, Smitha. I appreciate your kind words.
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Brilliantly inspired borrowing from Alice, who I had not heard of before and thank you for the introduction.
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Thank you, Graham. You might know Alice Walker better as the author of the novel, The Color Purple. But she does poetry, too.
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I did think it might be the same woman
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Simply brilliant — again! — LuAnne. Thank you for sharing it.
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And thank you for stopping by and leaving such a kind comment.
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A gorgeous brokenness.
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*Love*
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beautifully broken
thank you for writing!
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Thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment.
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Stunning! I read this poem over and over. Congratulations on being the featured poem.
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What a kind comment, Nina. I really appreciate it. Thank you for stopping by. I feel honored to be the featured poet.
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LuAnne, I absolutely love this poem. I am delighted for you. You and your poem deserve to be featured!
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Thank you, Heather. I am delighted, too!!!! 🙂
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Lovely poem! I’m not nearly as good a poet, although I’ve been reasonably happy with some of my NaPoWriMo output this year.
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Thank you. I would like to read some of your poetry but I do not seem to be able to link to your site.
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LOVE this!!! One of my favorites of yours!!
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Thank you, Sherri.
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This is so simple and profound. Congratulations on the feature. 🙂
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So pleased your wonderful work got the recognition today! A fit reward for all your practice and thought.
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Thank you, Carol.
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This is gorgeous and so hopeful x
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Thank you for stopping by and leaving this kind comment.
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Lovelyy
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What a truly wonderful poem. Not everything that breaks requires fixing.
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Beautiful
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