I puzzle over how
the winter sky sheds
frozen tears
Is she longing for the light?
Or is she sending treasures to earth
as the fruits of her joy?
I puzzle over how
the winter sky sheds
frozen tears
Is she longing for the light?
Or is she sending treasures to earth
as the fruits of her joy?
Beautifully written 😊
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Thank you for your kind words.
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What a wonderful poem, LuAnne. Thank you.
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Thanks, Joan.
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Love the whimsy of this!
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Thank you, V.J. Snowfalls are rather whimsical. 🙂
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They are!
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A refreshing take on snowfall! Or sleet? More sleet than snow here – falling bits as fruits of Nature’s joy is quite a twist from angst about icy roads! (So very human to judge weather as all about US. Love this alternate possibility.)
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I always enjoy your comments, Jazz. I try to stay off any icy streets these days and just sit by the window and watch the snow ballet. Actually, I just arrived in Mexico yesterday to sunny skies, tropical bird songs and the beach. I love it here and try to get down once a year or so but we missed it last year due to injuries. That makes it all the more special to be here now. And I got the added bonus to have a layover in Nashville where my sister lives and we had such a lovely visit. Thanks for dropping by and for adding your interesting comments. Always a pleasure. Stay warm and safe!
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this is beautiful Luanne — both the image and the poem!!
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Thank you, Penny. I think I took that photo back in November when we had so much snow. But since then it has been really warm for MI this winter. I just arrived in Mexico last night so I am enjoying the mid 80s weather, the tropical bird songs, the jungle’s lush green and having no where to drive. I appreciate your comment. Take care.
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Frozen tears!
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Thanks, Leslie.
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Oh wow..i love how whimsical and dreamy this is…especially the line that says “the winter sky sheds
frozen tears”..
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Thank you so much for stopping by and adding a comment. Winter skies can be rather magical, especially in Michigan in the U.S. where I live. I am glad you enjoyed this little poem.
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