Tumbles

gurgling stream

Water tumbles over stones
as the silver creek flows –
nature’s gurgling music

Life tumbles over troubles
as wavering times arise –
growth’s raspy music

6 thoughts on “Tumbles”

boundlessblessingsblog says:

January 3, 2020 at 9:52 am

Beautiful poem, LuAnne.

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1. LuAnne Holder says:
  
  January 3, 2020 at 10:24 am
  
  Thank you, Kamal.
  
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  1. boundlessblessingsblog says:
    
    January 3, 2020 at 10:56 am
    
    Welcome 😊😊😊
    
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Jazz Jaeschke says:

January 3, 2020 at 2:43 pm

Growth as “raspy” links well! Though gleeful gurgles mix in at points I reflect on my own growth through all these years … and yup … overall “raspy”!

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1. LuAnne Holder says:
  
  January 3, 2020 at 7:48 pm
  
  Well, at least the troubled waters are pretty raspy. 🙂 Thanks for dropping by. I always enjoy your comments.
  
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V.J. Knutson says:

January 5, 2020 at 3:20 pm

So beautiful.

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