This gully-washer’s been goin’ on
three days now since Mundee,
and won’t let up a lick,
the clouds are plumb full to the brim
and pitching a hellova hissy fit
The Day Ten prompt was to write a poem that starts from a regional phrase, particularly one to describe a weather phenomenon. I grew up in Nashville, Tennessee (USA) where it rains more than Seattle, not gentle continuous drizzles but storms with heavy downpours. Such a storm was often called a gully-washer or a toad-strangler. I threw in a few other colorful expressions and pronunciations that I heard growing up just for fun of it.
Loved this! I picture the old guys on coffee row having this discussion!
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That’s funny because my father spent mornings hanging at a coffee counter with other guys who worked construction. It was his sales office. He was the one in the family with colorful language and wild stories.
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Perhaps his voice came through in your writing!
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I love this. My dad’s childhood was split between Arkansas and Texas and this is the way he talks, especially when I was a little kid and he’d only been living in Minnesota a few years. This comes with so much personality.
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Thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your story. I live in Michigan now and rarely use these phrases so writing this poem was so much fun and gave me the pleasure of those memories.
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My dad has lived in Minnesota now since I think like a year and a half since before I was born, so just over 30 years, and his accent is mostly gone and so are SOME of those southern phrases but they still slip out every so often and it always makes me smile. Glad writing this got to bring back some good times for you. =)
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Nice poem and an awesome picture, LuAnne.
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Thank you!
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Welcome
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I like that language!!
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You have similar roots to me, Martha. 🙂
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Wonderful – a playful perspective is good therapy.
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So rich in sounds and images.
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Thank you. Southern expressions spoken with a Southern drawl are quite lyrical I think.
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