dream beyond heaven
awaken to expansiveness
it’s only life after all
unlearn what doesn’t connect
there’s more than one answer
dream beyond heaven
soak the roots of what you know
with unscienced surprises
it’s only life after all
savor your introduction
to re-eternity
dream beyond heaven
braid cleverness with
uncertainty and awe
it’s only life after all
open-eyed and fast asleep
let go of earthly troubles
dream beyond heaven
it’s only life after all
Italicized lines are taken from outside texts: it’s only life after all and there’s more than one answer from “Closer to Fine” and open-eyed and fast asleep from “Secure Yourself” – lyrics by the Indigo Girls
Day Five prompt: write a poem that incorporates at least one of the following: (1) the villanelle form, (2) lines taken from an outside text, and/or (3) phrases that oppose each other in some way.
Loved the juxtaposition of heaven and life, so very relaxed!
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Thank you, Heather.
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You are most welcome.
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“soak the roots of what you know with unscienced surprises it’s only life after all”
Wonderful verse, LuAnne. I love the “unscienced surprises.”
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My favorite lines:
soak the roots of what you know
with unscienced surprises
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Thank you so much, Don. I wonder if I wrote that because I was so bad at science? 🙂
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Thanks, Jazz. I really enjoyed working with this poetic form. It was very inspiring.
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A good poem LuAnne.
Pat
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Glad you stopped by, Pat, and thanks for your comment.
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Absolutely… life is to be enjoyed. Great reminders. LuAnne.
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Love how this flows, and the message of daring to experience beyond…
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Thanks, V.J. I thought this poetic form would be constricting but I found it to be quite liberating.
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You did it well!
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