Should I write a “she” poem today?
Or would viewing the world as impartial observer
make the poem too aloof?
What if I write an “I” poem instead?
Would my narrow approach be too
narcissistic to relate to anyone else?
What if I write from a “you” point of view?
Would you read me as preachy and brace yourself
with a you’re-not-the-boss-of-me attitude?
What if I just write a question poem
since questions abound in interesting forms
and answers are prone to mystery?
Should I perhaps poll a committee?
This poem is self-referential because I do ponder the value of each point of view. Is a third person approach too detached? Is a first person perspective too exclusive? Is a second person voice too bossy? I tend to use all three voices. Do others wrestle with this question when writing fiction or penning a poem? I welcome all to share your perspectives.
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In the Pensive Daily Prompt
like your poem. you are so prolific. always good to read.
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Amazing read
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Thank you for stopping by. I am glad you enjoyed the post.
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It’s nice that you have a “creative” use for that — pondering the points of view. The committee in my head never shut up and agree on anything. LOL
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If you have never seen the movie Inside Out, I highly recommend it. Sometimes those arguing voices can figure out how to work together.
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Haven’t seen it. Guess I should rent it! LOL
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